In the Holidays I went to Wellington. I stayed at my Aunties house for 4 days and 5 nights. I went shopping 2 day on the last day I went swimming. When I got home I had sleepovers and lots of fun.
Great work Greer but I see a sentence that didn't really make sense "I went shopping 2 day on the last day I went swimming" maybe be break up the sentence I didn't really understand but great work!
Your Auntie sounds fun.There are quite alot of I's. You must of had a great holiday.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Greer but I see a sentence that didn't really make sense "I went shopping 2 day on the last day I went swimming" maybe be break up the sentence I didn't really understand but great work!
ReplyDeletegood jod Greer maybe next time you could put more description into your story
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